Look out for phrases:
– Worse part..
– It’s not a character flow..
– You keep showing up..
– You are not broken..
Although this things are nice to hear and readers will appreciate for a short time. Once people will start to understand that it is a cookie cutter they will stop respecting you as an author.
Try replacing these phrases with other creative forms of speech.
Especially avoid using it in books. Find your own voice for the book. I have more to share on my book writing training that you should join. I am serious.
